My favourite day at the weekend is Saturday.
The weekends when I stay with my father, we usually
go to Isla Cristina's beach, and I enjoy very much.
In the beach I have got a lot of friends.
The weekends when I stay with my mother, I
meet my friends and I go out with them.
At night I sometimes sleep in my grandmother house
or in my house with my mother and brother.
I also go riding a horse with my uncle and brother, he
is very good!.
Bye!
The weekends when I stay with my father, (When I spend the weekends with my father sounds better)
ResponderEliminarI enjoy IT very much
In AT the beach
The weekends when I stay with my mother (see explanation about your father's weekends)
my grandmother (saxon genitive: GRANDMOTHER'S) house
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